As it did so, a strong area of high pressure was burgeoning over eastern Canada, producing a tremendous pressure gradient between the high and the lowering pressure of the gale center.
A shocking buddy read with Susanne! Quiet stakes can feel wildly loud, when they really mean something.
What is particularly impressive here is the dedication of professional storm watchers to save any human life at sea, no matter what foolishness or bad luck led to the trouble.
Beyond stylistic preferences, I had problems with its structure.